Denied Donavin Jones - Event Concept #11 - 'Riot Civil Unrest'

[Donavin Jones]

Steam Name & ID: Meme_Lord_Satan
Discord Name & ID: Dog#2267


Minimum two paragraph backstory on the concept:

R I O T

In this you will either play rioters or riot police.
This will be a 3 day event, each day having different bonus's/debuffs depending on what side did. I.E, if riot police were very violent, they lose support.


The city will be in Los Angles, 1984. Hardcore Punk is on its high, and a riot is about to occur due to police brutality and economical issues in the city.

Riot Police - 0/15

News Crew - 0/3

Rioters - 0/∞​

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If your backstory does not cover the following questions, please answer them.


Do you wish to spearhead the project if your concept is accepted? (You will run the event alongside the SS team.): Yes, I would love to.


Is this concept set in the Half-Life universe?: No.


Will this concept follow Willard’s Timeline?: No.


Will this concept affect the mainserver?: Yes, citadel blow up!!!

 

[SnakeSupreme]

Several Short Stories staff members have an issue with this concept. The main keynote being the event's plotline synopsis is way too short. The plotline needs to be expanded upon and it requires to have a sort of goal or main objective rather than just a riot occurring in the middle of Los Angeles because of hardcore punk.

The concept itself is too generic for Short Stories to make a cohesive event out of it. With that being said, this submission is unfortunately denied.