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The day in Industrial Twenty-Four starts off with the typical howling of wild machinery and the spreading of smog, citizens shuffling through the streets and jackboots chatting among themselves. However, some odd man enters the slums and tosses down a letter upon the ground-- before backtracking to the city proper.
Hello, Geneva Uncensored.
I am an expert investigator within the Civil Protection, the best detective in the entire district actually, and I read your newspaper by happenstance. I don't care about the main article, politics aren't what interests me, but I noticed that you wrote about the serial killer in town. I was delighted to see public awareness of him growing, but also quite horrified and disappointed to see the usage of improper terminology.
He is not the "Breen Can Killer". This is, first off, a bad name. It makes people think that he's killing them with cans, which is wrong! He uses a variety of tools, I doubt I need to explain it to a fellow reader of literature, and none of them are Breen cans. Instead, his name is the Canmouth Killer.
Please correct this in future editions. It left a sour taste in my mouth during my morning read. Thank you, all the worst,
The best detective in Civil Protection.
I am an expert investigator within the Civil Protection, the best detective in the entire district actually, and I read your newspaper by happenstance. I don't care about the main article, politics aren't what interests me, but I noticed that you wrote about the serial killer in town. I was delighted to see public awareness of him growing, but also quite horrified and disappointed to see the usage of improper terminology.
He is not the "Breen Can Killer". This is, first off, a bad name. It makes people think that he's killing them with cans, which is wrong! He uses a variety of tools, I doubt I need to explain it to a fellow reader of literature, and none of them are Breen cans. Instead, his name is the Canmouth Killer.
Please correct this in future editions. It left a sour taste in my mouth during my morning read. Thank you, all the worst,
The best detective in Civil Protection.
