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I can see the scenebuilding you've done here, and it fits well with the wildness of the slums! I would suggest shifting the camera so the focus is on Goodfella, though. (Or better yet- his shooter.) They're very small in the image, which makes it difficult to actually notice what's going on. Having the shooter be mostly off-camera is an interesting choice, and one that I don't think works the best here, since this screenshot is meant to capture the action.
All in all, I can see you used this one as a chance to try out scenebuilds, and I think it's gone well! Remember to take your time with these things, and always try to improve. This shot might be improved with a better focus on it's characters, and some more dramatic lighting to properly convey the mood. All in all though, it's a very decent piece!

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Oh hey, that means i was lying right next to Snooring Ron while i was knocked out by that Goofy CP!
*** Walks up to you from Behind shooting you instatly after you saw the quest boardHow it really went:
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I like the attention to detail. Good work!
yeah that checks out*** Walks up to you from Behind shooting you instatly after you saw the quest board
Okay Liquid Ron