I got reminded of this scene after reading thatEither that's a mistake, or it beckons me to wonder "what if..."
Anyway, you might want to fix these small typos. Alas is the next issue where upon reading, it honest to god looks to me like this entire backstory doesn't appear an ounce serious.
This has been REJECTED, and you can either edit the same post and make something better with a credible summary, or create a new character.