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Marina Grozovskaya - Technocratic Haruspex

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«Life is often a mountain, it is a long moment of struggle as your hands turn calloused and cut,
your body giving out through the abuse done to it, the muscles locking and trembling.
Life is but a string of moments; Birth and death is but two moments with work being the longest one.
The longest one, providing a source of comfort once you reach the end.»



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«There is no shame in failing, it's a corner stone for learning, improvement and more importantly to grow as a person. Life is cruel and punishing, for one to live through it all is to gain a strength and wisdom that many yearn for - Those who are intelligent enough to know what to yearn for... I must admit, sometimes doing the wrong things can make you a bad person; To hurt, exploit, trample... It is the show of the rat race. We either keep up with the pace or tumble down and simply get crushed under the weight.»









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«My wrong choices led me down to a world of pain and a road of struggle. Conscript service for so called political perversion... People don't like thinkers these days, people who are uncorrupt, believers in the benefactors - Not wanting the old world of exploitation, genocide and degradation... The service turned me into a monster. I hated every fiber of my own being -- I cannot sleep without seeing their faces when I close my eyes.»





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«To Ukraine I was sent... In the trenches as a medic, a field surgeon... Even medical trials, too... I was exploited like how I exploited the captured. Fascists, anarchists, bandits and those unlucky were not spared... Even our own were not spared... A lot of death, agony and anger spilled over the muddy and cold fields...»







Кому: Андрей Шмидт.
От: Марина Грозовская.

Тема: Теорема о ноосфере.

Здравствуйте, доктор Шмидт.

Я благодарен за вашу переписку и интерес к моему маленькому проекту. Я верю, что это может внести большой вклад в достижение золотого века для нашего вида, в реальный эволюционный рост и великое вознесение. Все, что мне действительно нужно, — это ваше согласие и согласие совета министерства, чтобы дать мне зеленый свет на реализацию моего проекта. Я перечислю с небольшими подробностями факторы, которые могут подробно объяснить то, что я говорю.

Фактор №1: Расширенный когнитивный доступ:
Ноосфера обеспечивает практически мгновенный доступ к огромным объемам информации, способствуя интеллектуальному расширению, обучению и сотрудничеству в глобальном масштабе. Это может ускорить решение проблем, инновации и межкультурное взаимопонимание.

Фактор №2: Коллективный интеллект:
Через общие платформы, такие как интранет, форумы и сообщества с открытым исходным кодом, люди вносят свой вклад и получают выгоду от коллективной мудрости. Этот краудсорсинговый интеллект может превзойти индивидуальную экспертизу в некоторых контекстах.

Фактор №3: Эмоциональная солидарность:
Ноосфера способствует общему эмоциональному опыту на расстоянии — глобальному горю, радости или возмущению (например, реакции на крупные мировые события), усиливая эмпатию и чувство глобальной общности.

Спасибо, что уделили время прочтению этого письма, надеюсь, оно дойдет до вас хорошо. Желаю вам удачи в вашей политической карьере, в которой я поддерживаю красные Советы, как и вы сами.

С наилучшими пожеланиями, Доктор Грозовская.

Кому: Андрей Шмидт.
От: Марина Грозовская.

Тема: Технические и практические прототипы.

Здравствуйте, доктор Шмидт.

Я получил ваше последнее письмо, и это действительно плохие новости, что большинство членов комитета отклонили зеленый свет для моего проекта и, в частности, ордер на эксперимент. Я предоставил им все необходимые документы, ресурсы, средства и запланированную схему для указанных экспериментов.

Я дам вам их снова, просто на всякий случай. Помните, что это мои патенты и у них есть необходимые документы, указывающие на это. Я могу подробнее рассказать о том, что все это делает, но вкратце: оно подключается к ноосфере и создает единое состояние коллективного разума.
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«To think of it all... I got out in the end, I felt anger, sadness, happiness and fear...
At times, I wish I did not feel anything because often, I'm crushed by the world,
by the negative... It made me stronger, I have more than most people and for that I'm thankful.»

Documentational Information
Name: Marina Grozovskaya.
Date of Birth: 17th June 1997.
Place of Birth: Tomsk, Tomsk Oblast, Russian Federation.
CID: 55568.
Occupation: Civil Medical Union Doctor and Pharmacologist.
Education: Echelon & City 3 Medical school.
Previous Relocations: City 3, City 32, City 53, City 14, City 3.
Current Relocation: City 24.
Biological Information

Gender: Female.
Ethnicity: White, Russian.
Hair Colour: Dark Brown/Black.
Eye Colour: Brown.
Height: 1.7 Meters.
Weight: 62 Kilograms.
Blood Type: B+.
Build: Slim.
Medical History

Past Serious Injuries: Loss of sight in left eye.
Past Serious Diseases/Illnesses: Pneumonia (11-11-20).
Allergies: None.
Physical Health Issues: Malnutrition.
Mental Health Issues: None.

Physical State: Healthy.
Mental State: Moderate.
Family Records

Alexei Grozovskiy - Father - Reported Unknown by M. Grozovskaya.
Valentina Grozovskaya - Mother - Reported Unknown by M. Grozovskaya.
Natalya Grozovskaya - Sister - Alive ; City 31.
Vladimir Grozovskiy - Brother - Alive ; City 62.
Leonid Grozovskiy - Brother - Dead.
Mikhail Grozovskiy - Brother - Alive ; City 36.

Relations

Michael is a fellow colleague within the medical union. He is a rather quiet and reserved man, marred by sadness and no doubt past trauma; I like him as I find some solace in him, we aren't much different but also different at the same time. I feel pity for him because no one should really go through horrendous calamity. From what I've spoken with him, he is a rather friendly and respectable person with seemingly good intentions but it appears the universe has different ideas for him - Not matter his kindness, disposition nor what good he does... He is still seemingly punished by a poor fate, for which I somewhat mirror and sympathize with.
A good person should get good in return and not to be spat in the face.

Uwe Schulz: A patient that I had previously worked on. One moment I am helping get a bullet out of him and the next we're talking about politics and my personal way of it. He is a very intelligent man, I somewhat respect him as he's a well adjusted citizen; Once again another person marred and scarred by misfortune and even burn out. He has apparently been in this city for a few years now, apart from the occasional relocation to... City eight? I think - Anyway, he has warned me of my ideas even though they are within the confines of Ascensionism but alas, he appears to be a man that cares.

A young and aspiring star within the collaborator's party, and the MOE. I remember when I first met you, being a supporter; We had and still have good chemistry for now we are colleagues and are members within the same binder. She has even helped me become part of the VET and the binder, giving me a chance to rub shoulders with people of power and admiration - I thank her a lot for it and I personally look forward to where her career sends her as for me she seems like a hard working woman and deserves what she has in life, even more.

One of the first people I got to know when I arrived here. We had hit it off, our friendly relations improving over time and built into a mutual respect in which can flourish greatly - I feel anyway. She has been helping me with various tasks around the city and within the clinic, even extending to buy me a meal at an establishment and gave a beer with it too! I look forward to our blossoming relationship but alas we are both busy women in a busy yet so dead city.

I see a woman who has gone far in life, got so much and achieved somewhat well... But this isn't without the drawbacks, the years of grinding down by incompetency, heartbreak and random crap; Contending with the worse that bureaucratic and medical life has to offer. This is something I sense but I feel somewhat of a pity for her, a person who is trying hard but gets bullshit for it... It's not right nor fair - Then again, life isn't fair for anyone. What more I see from Eleanor is a woman who really knows what she wants and deserves through her lot in life; a woman who is hell bent on success and getting to the top, thus she has done it. She is genuinely successful and it shows, albeit with the aforementioned downsides. This is a woman to actually look up to: All the stress, anger and misfortune has paid off which will continue to pay off more... I see a lot of myself in her and I like her overall. I enjoy spending time with her and look forward to seeing her more.

At first I thought you was pretentious, an older man of the old world thinking he was better than everyone... But I was wrong, I admit to my faults and that I'm simply wrong. You're a good Doctor and pharmacist... I cannot say otherwise but also you seem to have a heart full of kindness... You've spoken to me with kindness when I was down and alone, even putting my name forward for the medal I still wear now; You've given me a proud moment, you've made my work all worth it in the end - Kick started my career into the party with this very event. For this, I thank you, greatly.

Marcus is a person who has it all, one of the luckier people; Came from nothing and found his golden egg. He is a man to be respected, coming from humble roots and even currently serving within the Conscript Forces. He has certainly made his mark there with all the medals he has and within the Collaborator sphere - I'm sure he will do well within the political. Personally what I know about him, face to face is that he is a respectable gentleman who is rather proud but humble. He is not insulting with his footing and awards in life, a man that many should look up to as a prime example.

A chance encounter at a work shift led to meeting this man; through all the exhaustion, malnourishment and dizziness, I kept collapsing. He was there to check up on me, he cared for me. Always offering to buy me a meal, can't stand seeing me be hungry. I took his offer, he wouldn't stop. When I sat down and broke bread with him, I learned a lot about him; Being a man of good intention, willing to work in an education program under the Ministry. I would like to get to know him more one day.

If there is one person I would love to perform pharmaceutical and scientific trials on. It would be Larry-fucking-Leckman. It was you - YOU bastard that had to throw a glass bottle at me and cause me to lose my eye, my very vision... Nothing but a milky-white husk of flesh... You did all of this to seem loyal but I know you're a snake in the system, you're not loyal. Never was... Look at where I am now and where you are. Nothing but a charlatan.

A very kind and comely older gentleman who I had the pleasure to chat with. Our time together was short but you had changed my life for the better in this chance encounter. You took the time out of your day to recommend me for collaborator status - I was thrilled and excited over the chance - The very idea of it all. It was passed, I got in thanks to you, Arthur. I may not have many things to say to you nor do I know you much personally but of your business; With all my heart: You are a great man.
 
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Wrong gender of the verb. The Russian language has gender declensions for nouns and gender endings for verbs. This one refers to an action done by a man and I assume it was supposed to be done by a woman. Thus "застряла". Same goes for later down the line, "больной ублюдок" is definitely not something you'd call a woman, since the noun is of a male gender. There are more verbs with the wrong gender distinction since the translator defaulted to the male version.
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There are also very unnatural fragments like this. Even in English this would sound pretty weird - "Deleted segments of data are incorrect!" Other times there are words that you really wouldn't use in the situation. For example, "Расскажи мне!", while translating to "Tell me!", does not hold the same notion of imperativeness. The prefix "Рас-" suggests that you're beseeching for agreement from the other party - the better word would be "говори", although it'd still require some elements to make it sound natural.
Черт, это неправильно.
Incorrect word usage. This translates to "This is incorrect" because the translator picked the wrong variant of "wrong". In general, I don't think the expression "This is wrong" even exists in Russian in the same meaning of describing something utterly messed up. Usually you'd say "Боже правый" or something like that.
Кому: Андрей Шмидт.
От: Марина Грозовская.
As for the letters, you'd use Dative Case for the recipient (Кому: Андрею Шмидт), or, more naturally, you could simply use formal writing: "Кому: Шмидт А. N." - where the N stands for the middle name, aka the name of the person's father (Schmidt is a foreign surname, so it is not changeable through cases). The sender, in the current format, would be affected by the Genitive Case (От: Марины Алексеевны Грозовской), or alternatively, "От: Грозовской М. А."
С наилучшими пожеланиями, Доктор Грозовская.
Letter endings are usually the same as English - separate lines. Full name at the end, the person's position is usually written in detail (although you can probably leave it out for private exchanges).

"С наилучшими пожеланиями,
Доктор [branch of medicine or science] or Сотрудник [department, sector] Грозовская М. А."

Pathologic screenie is cool, though, along with the reference in the title.
 
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Wrong gender of the verb. The Russian language has gender declensions for nouns and gender endings for verbs. This one refers to an action done by a man and I assume it was supposed to be done by a woman. Thus "застряла". Same goes for later down the line, "больной ублюдок" is definitely not something you'd call a woman, since the noun is of a male gender. There are more verbs with the wrong gender distinction since the translator defaulted to the male version.

There are also very unnatural fragments like this. Even in English this would sound pretty weird - "Deleted segments of data are incorrect!" Other times there are words that you really wouldn't use in the situation. For example, "Расскажи мне!", while translating to "Tell me!", does not hold the same notion of imperativeness. The prefix "Рас-" suggests that you're beseeching for agreement from the other party - the better word would be "говори", although it'd still require some elements to make it sound natural.

Incorrect word usage. This translates to "This is incorrect" because the translator picked the wrong variant of "wrong". In general, I don't think the expression "This is wrong" even exists in Russian in the same meaning of describing something utterly messed up. Usually you'd say "Боже правый" or something like that.

As for the letters, you'd use Dative Case for the recipient (Кому: Андрею Шмидт), or, more naturally, you could simply use formal writing: "Кому: Шмидт А. N." - where the N stands for the middle name, aka the name of the person's father (Schmidt is a foreign surname, so it is not changeable through cases). The sender, in the current format, would be affected by the Genitive Case (От: Марины Алексеевны Грозовской), or alternatively, "От: Грозовской М. А."

Letter endings are usually the same as English - separate lines. Full name at the end, the person's position is usually written in detail (although you can probably leave it out for private exchanges).

"С наилучшими пожеланиями,
Доктор [branch of medicine or science] or Сотрудник [department, sector] Грозовская М. А."

Pathologic screenie is cool, though, along with the reference in the title.
I genuinely like and appreciate the explanation of the errors in the Russian segments. I must admit, now I have been told, I myself find it a bit too bold and rich. Thank you for going through with it for me, but out of respect for the Russian speakers in this community I will convert it all back to English, also to make it more coherent. As for the game Pathologic, from the little time I've played, I've genuinely loved it. The story and atmosphere is a chef's kiss.
 
I genuinely like and appreciate the explanation of the errors in the Russian segments. I must admit, now I have been told, I myself find it a bit too bold and rich. Thank you for going through with it for me, but out of respect for the Russian speakers in this community I will convert it all back to English, also to make it more coherent. As for the game Pathologic, from the little time I've played, I've genuinely loved it. The story and atmosphere is a chef's kiss.
Don't worry about the whole respect thing (there are basically only 2 Russian speakers in WN as far as I know). Personally, I always get quite excited when people engage with my native language. Plus, I think it's cool when players try to really get down with the culture/language of the chars they make, and from what I read on this one, I really appreciate your character not going into the generic stereotype territory.

But anyway, wish you luck on the cold front. I'm gonna make that upper post into a spoiler so it doesn't block half of the page.
 
were you the one where i "accidentally" threw a glass bottle to?
 
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