The End to a Good Fella.

[Fallizs]

the true finale of the Goodfellas

 

[George]

Open for Critism.

Good scenebuilding with the props of grass and such, though variation is always welcome. I'd personally make the fauna a bit more subtle, possibly by pushing it into the ground and spreading it out. Matching the colours would also be good.

Experiment with lighting, as much as you *can* do in garry's mod though I recommend moving over to SFM as you'll find better success with creating realistic lighting there.

Lastly I'd say work on the camera placement so that the main action in the shot is front and centre. The man being shot is the focal point so I'd place him in the middle then put the shooter further back in the frame closer to the edge with some blur, what's referred to as an "over the shoulder" shot
(over the shoulder shot diagram here)



Though overall I'd say keep at it, it's fun to get into. Keep up the good work


And ofc RIP Ron Goodfella, a chad among wojacks.

 

[Leko]

Good scenebuilding with the props of grass and such, though variation is always welcome. I'd personally make the fauna a bit more subtle, possibly by pushing it into the ground and spreading it out. Matching the colours would also be good.

Experiment with lighting, as much as you *can* do in garry's mod though I recommend moving over to SFM as you'll find better success with creating realistic lighting there.

Lastly I'd say work on the camera placement so that the main action in the shot is front and centre. The man being shot is the focal point so I'd place him in the middle then put the shooter further back in the frame closer to the edge with some blur, what's referred to as an "over the shoulder" shot
(over the shoulder shot diagram here)
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Though overall I'd say keep at it, it's fun to get into. Keep up the good work


And ofc RIP Ron Goodfella, a chad among wojacks.

Thanks alot for your Suggestions! And yes, Ive Thought about Moving to SFM alot, Because as you Mentioned, The Lighting, and general Tools are simply better for certain stuff. Just, Ive Become way more Used to the GMod Posing, And ofcourse, in SFM you dont have a Physics gun or somthin like that. So, I'll be defently Looking into SFM sometime.. Maybe sometime in the Future ill upload something that i did with SFM, i dunno. But Generally, Thanks alot for your Suggestions, Ill see if i can somehow Implement the ''over the shoulder shot'' in my Next screenshot...